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My listing needs constructive criticism.

I need your constructive critism on my listing. It's one of my first and I don't want to make it sound like I'm cheating someone.

My Listing

What would you do to make it sound more convincing?

dancingtechguy
Hey that's strange. Someone's comment with a -1 for feedback got deleted and it wasn't me.
Apr-20-08 12:38:21 PDT Report this comment
april3347
Hi listing looks good..if you have problems selling its not the item. Its your score is low and people are affraid to take risk.
Apr-20-08 12:38:31 PDT Report this comment

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